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Poetry Appreciation Topic

Post by [A]ncient on Wed Oct 27, 2010 8:07 am

So I thought we could start a topic about poetry seeing this is the "Art Section".

This is one of my numerous countless poems.

Puzzled Heart Box

In this world,
Consumed by grey.
When all emotions are put away.
When our minds stay focuses and never sway.
We have a heart box with which we play.
We fill it up,
Turn it around.
Bestow it with our memories,
Our emotions and our doubt.

We roam around in the misty grey,
Faces from all life deprived, staring into the great oblivion.
How your eyes seem dim, so shallow and with fog filled.
Never more shall I take there a swim.

My Heart box,
I puzzled it,
Fixed it,
Sealed it,
And put it away.
Filled with all of my emotions,
Everything that could make me sway.

In this world,
So wretched and destroyed,
Our hearts mere puppets, whom were easily with toyed.
We locked them away,
In a little Heart Shaped Box.
Puzzled them away, behind a riddle,
Behind a lie.
We no longer share any of those emotions who would normally make us cry.

But now after so many time.
I grant thee a Puzzled Heart Box that was mine,
Filled with all of my emotions and thoughts.
It is now up to you to choose with it what you would like to do.
Open it, leave it closed,
Cherish it,
Sleep with it,
Or burry it underneath the sand,
Where my emotions will never more be at hand.


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Post by [A]ncient on Wed Oct 27, 2010 4:18 pm

Thats Good!, Did you write it?
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Post by [A]ncient on Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:27 am

One of my more recent works.

The Cold Tundra

In the cold tundra and icy lakes,
With frozen snow and her glazing tears,
Those smothered cries and all her fears.
Pray the arctic surface will never dissipate.

She sat there at the willow tree,
Howling at the wind,
With many things to repent,
It will take it's time to mend.

The ground has frozen solid,
Her tears iced-up as stalactites on her cheeks.
A soul filled with remorse,
While she wallows in self-pity.

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Post by Kae on Tue Jul 26, 2011 5:37 am

that was bad
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Post by ♡♥♡(✿◠‿◠)✿♥♡♥ on Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:09 am

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Post by Asunyan on Tue Jul 26, 2011 9:54 am

Kae wrote:that was bad

Ignore him, it was great. Shakespeare would have agreed I'm sure.

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Post by [A]ncient on Tue Jul 26, 2011 4:17 pm

Thx guys, I'm glad you liked it Very Happy.

Rofl, Ice Queen will be in my head for the rest of the day now >.< XD!

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Post by [A]ncient on Wed Jul 27, 2011 1:34 am

WRUM! wrote:
[A]ncient wrote:Thx guys, I'm glad you liked it Very Happy.

Rofl, Ice Queen will be in my head for the rest of the day now >.< XD!
But Ice Queen is good for you :3

True :p ahahaha:D!

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